Score: 6

"I'm bored with sticks"

submission: Killing Spree VI - Teaser

date: January 2, 2006

But I tried to rate it fairly as you did a good job animating.Sound was good as well.

The voice in the beggining seems like the cliche narrator from a battle royal or something.The bullets of course have the slow motion and turbulence around them that we are so familiar with from the matrix.

Looking at that chainsaw I realized another problem.Ryobi does NOT make a gas powered chainsaw.Heres a few that do:Husqvarna, Stihl, Jonesred, Echo, Homelite, Poulan(not so good), Crafstman(Poulan with different stickers).I'd stick one of those names on your saw before you embarrass yourself further.

Besides that your movie looks good and should please everyone here that likes this sort of thing.

Score: 3

"Chili peppers is about the only good part"

submission: SMB: All Aboard!

date: January 1, 2006

The rest of this flash drags itself haphazardly along like an alzheimers patient with legs removed.I say alzheimers patient because it apparently can't remember what plotline it was supposed to follow.

Truth to tell, the rantings of a naked crazed elder person thinking he or she is on a Vaudeville performance might have been a better idea.Sans the no legs part.We want them to dance as well.

Score: 5

"Looks great but I have some holes to point out"

submission: Dead Stench 2 : Intro

date: January 1, 2006

Although the feel of this series is absolutely stellar I wonder how you would have a "scientist" 2000 years ago.Wouldn't they have been alchemists or at least wise men or something?Just a semantic but you should word it right I think.

Next, how would the guy who finds the book know to read what would surely be ancient aramaic or some other archaic and forgotten language.I would of course accept that he's a reincarnation of the "scientist" in question but make sure and cover that base.

And now my final grievance...The syringe in the end of the trailer.Looks suspiciously like the stuff in "Reanimator" that was used to render the dearly departed ambulatory again.Would a body snatcher of 2000 years ago have had a syringe even remotely similar to the one shown?I'm no archeologist but I tend to think he wouldn't.

Besides the, the narrators voice is cool and fits well.Your style of drawing where everything seems rusty and worn is great.I can't wait to see this series start in earnest.

Score: 5

"Could have been better"

submission: Primal War 2

date: December 30, 2005

As the guy before me said, some of the scenes were lackluster.Add to that the sound which was very repetitive and low quality and you're not going to glean much of a score or following for long.

Put alot more time and effort into your next submission.This could be a great little series but you're not doing your own creation justice.Let's see the inspiration that triggered this idea.

Score: 6

"Better then the first"

submission: The Ma$sAcre 2: Revenge

date: December 30, 2005

Samus, why do you still do sticks?Is it like a calling or some strange obsession?I just think you're wasting yourself is all.

The musical score is MUCH better on this submission.It's not all just sticks either.There's real drawing here.The sticks for the most part are wonderfully animated and all but why not push yourselves and do something more involved?

Score: 1

"Tired same old sticks"

submission: The Ma$sAcre

date: December 30, 2005

Much like "Dragula" stick figures are tired.Now like the "Dragula" remix they are being hashed and rehashed.I'm pretty tired on sticks and I'm nauseated by FOB zombie.

I hope the second massacre is something worth watching.

Nice animating though

Score: 8

"Work on your drawing"

submission: Dreams Prologue

date: December 28, 2005

After that I have nothing bad to say about this submission besides the drawings take a turn for the worse about halfway in.Perhaps you had to rush?

It gives me hope for newgrounds to find a meaningful submission such as this sent to my inbox for once.This seems truly inpired and sincere for what it lacks in drawing technique.

Score: 8

"Little rough but thrilling nonetheless"

submission: MONKKEY chapter 1

date: December 28, 2005

Drawing and sound is a bit wonky.However this submission deserves high marks in my book for plot and character relation.

The animation itself is very good as you can see in the sequence of the monk training with himself.

I hope to see more very soon.You are on my favorites list now.

Score: 6

"That was it?"

submission: The Liar

date: December 25, 2005

You should cram all 3 into one part.I hope this gets better.

Score: 7

""Norwegian wood" By the beatles plays in the back"

submission: moral sense

date: December 22, 2005

Its a nice little piece seemingly about nothing in particular.The perils of a soda can?